Would you like to come up and see my etchings?

[alexashbyart]

The lastest one with the lighting on the bottom is looking pretty good, the mood is pretty awesome I think. I feel the dude pointing at the girl could be a little less stiff though, I think the drawing is pretty good, but I think he could maybe be bent forward alittle more? Maybe try taking a few photos of your self from behind doing a similar action if possible.

Make the decapitated head father from that dark shape. It's kind of fused with the edge of it and I think having a clear silhouette of the head would be stronger.

Cheers!

-Alex