06-27-2014, 10:52 PM
You, thanks for the tips! The clay stdies are really cool, that must be an excellent way to learn forms. Really nice how you're varying the stroke direction. I think they'd look more confident if they had fewer marks in them, might be something to focus on in future ones
The caricature definitely coul dhave gone further, I think a problem with it is that you were willin gto exxagerated by making some shapes bigger, but it doesn't look like you exxagerated by making any of them smaller. One instance, I probably would have shrunk this dude's chin down a lot, that would have helped make his nose ring look bigger
The caricature definitely coul dhave gone further, I think a problem with it is that you were willin gto exxagerated by making some shapes bigger, but it doesn't look like you exxagerated by making any of them smaller. One instance, I probably would have shrunk this dude's chin down a lot, that would have helped make his nose ring look bigger