10-16-2020, 05:21 AM
Cool - those exercises sound really useful! I'd not heard of Kimon Nicolaides before but I just looked up his book and it had some great reviews.
Nice going with the Penny Pentagram panels - that flying kick panel feels really dynamic - you've got the choreography just right I reckon. One thing though is at first glance I didn't realise that the figure in the distance was the were-wolf - I thought it was some other random dude falling over but then I realised that Penny's kick had sent him flying over there. Maybe something to keep in mind as you're working this through - ensure the final location of each figure clear to the reader. Not sure if I'm making sense? If not please disregard - no offence will be taken :).
Take care Jyonny.
Nice going with the Penny Pentagram panels - that flying kick panel feels really dynamic - you've got the choreography just right I reckon. One thing though is at first glance I didn't realise that the figure in the distance was the were-wolf - I thought it was some other random dude falling over but then I realised that Penny's kick had sent him flying over there. Maybe something to keep in mind as you're working this through - ensure the final location of each figure clear to the reader. Not sure if I'm making sense? If not please disregard - no offence will be taken :).
Take care Jyonny.
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