10-30-2020, 09:08 AM
Lookin' good!
I think the main issue in the last couple of pages is how intense the street light is is. It almost looks like daylight, which is such a heavy contrast to everything else and breaks the follow a bit (especially if you are just skim reading it). I don't know what the solution is, if it's to play with the colours, values, etc. but "toning it down" might help keep the night time atmosphere
I think the main issue in the last couple of pages is how intense the street light is is. It almost looks like daylight, which is such a heavy contrast to everything else and breaks the follow a bit (especially if you are just skim reading it). I don't know what the solution is, if it's to play with the colours, values, etc. but "toning it down" might help keep the night time atmosphere