To infinity and beyooond
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I think the gestures look very sweet! Here and there could use some less lines but the flow looks great in my opinion! For your digital stuff I'd say, try to do some colour studies, and focus on coloured light. Right now your objects don't blend in with the environment because there is no colour of the environment returning in your objects. The picture on the fruit for example: the values of the fruit are many times lighter than the shadow that's right beneath them, and the blue tone of the cast shadow does not return in the object shadow. this makes your fruit look cut out and pasted, almost as if it is floating on top of your background.

The floating is also due to some minor perspective issues. Your fruit looks actually quite well rendered and voluminous, however there are parts where they seem as if they are intersecting (the apple and banana) or where they don't follow the same perspective as their cast shadow. What might help is construct basic forms (cylinders and spheres) and make sure the 'hidden parts' don't intersect with each other.

All in all, looks great, great to see you update daily. Can't wait to see more!
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To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 05-16-2014, 05:00 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 05-22-2014, 06:04 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by constructicon - 05-22-2014, 06:22 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 05-23-2014, 06:10 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by JyonnyNovice - 05-23-2014, 07:01 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 05-23-2014, 07:48 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by JyonnyNovice - 05-23-2014, 07:59 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 05-24-2014, 07:37 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 05-25-2014, 06:56 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by JyonnyNovice - 05-25-2014, 09:21 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 05-26-2014, 04:54 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by ShinOkami - 05-26-2014, 08:52 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 05-27-2014, 06:55 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Clarisse Silva - 05-27-2014, 09:29 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 05-27-2014, 11:36 PM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Clarisse Silva - 05-28-2014, 05:39 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by constructicon - 05-28-2014, 09:34 PM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 05-29-2014, 06:16 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 05-30-2014, 05:04 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 05-31-2014, 06:49 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by meat - 05-31-2014, 02:45 PM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 05-31-2014, 10:22 PM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-03-2014, 05:39 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-04-2014, 04:25 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-04-2014, 09:08 PM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Eve - 06-04-2014, 10:15 PM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-05-2014, 02:43 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Elderscroller - 06-05-2014, 05:30 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by ShinOkami - 06-05-2014, 06:32 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Eve - 06-05-2014, 08:29 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-06-2014, 03:29 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-07-2014, 12:04 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-10-2014, 04:17 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-11-2014, 02:23 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Eve - 06-11-2014, 05:56 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-12-2014, 05:04 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-13-2014, 05:09 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-14-2014, 01:35 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-15-2014, 05:15 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-16-2014, 01:39 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Forrestimel - 06-16-2014, 06:19 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-17-2014, 06:48 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-18-2014, 04:17 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-19-2014, 04:38 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-20-2014, 01:13 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-20-2014, 07:28 PM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-21-2014, 06:57 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-22-2014, 02:45 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by ShinOkami - 06-22-2014, 06:43 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-23-2014, 03:18 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-23-2014, 08:06 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-24-2014, 03:03 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-25-2014, 03:23 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-26-2014, 03:40 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Doolio - 06-26-2014, 04:32 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by JyonnyNovice - 06-26-2014, 08:26 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-27-2014, 07:19 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Doolio - 06-27-2014, 09:03 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by JyonnyNovice - 06-27-2014, 09:59 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by meat - 06-27-2014, 02:13 PM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-28-2014, 04:39 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by JyonnyNovice - 06-28-2014, 05:15 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 06-29-2014, 06:03 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 07-01-2014, 02:27 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by JyonnyNovice - 07-01-2014, 08:21 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 07-02-2014, 02:52 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 07-03-2014, 05:26 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 07-04-2014, 03:44 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 07-05-2014, 08:10 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 07-06-2014, 04:53 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 07-07-2014, 04:55 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 07-08-2014, 07:43 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 07-09-2014, 05:52 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by JyonnyNovice - 07-09-2014, 09:15 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 07-10-2014, 05:35 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 07-11-2014, 06:12 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by clockodile - 07-11-2014, 07:14 PM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 07-12-2014, 06:33 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 07-13-2014, 06:13 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by JyonnyNovice - 07-13-2014, 07:28 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 07-14-2014, 06:02 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 07-16-2014, 08:47 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 12-19-2022, 09:24 PM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by darktiste - 12-20-2022, 12:06 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by JosephCow - 12-20-2022, 08:45 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 12-20-2022, 08:19 PM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by cgmythology - 01-03-2023, 12:56 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 01-25-2023, 11:32 PM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by cgmythology - 01-30-2023, 02:59 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 02-09-2023, 12:59 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by ohnooo - 02-27-2023, 04:22 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Leo Ki - 02-09-2023, 01:44 PM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by cgmythology - 02-13-2023, 01:24 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 02-27-2023, 08:37 AM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Leo Ki - 03-01-2023, 12:38 PM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Cruptic - 03-01-2023, 10:00 PM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by darktiste - 03-01-2023, 10:24 PM
RE: To infinity and beyooond - by Dominicque - 03-02-2023, 08:17 AM

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