Victor wants to CREATE!
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Man, I like seeing people shill for the anatomy group (Thanks Zerathus).

Anyway, looks good, man :) Gonna give you a crit on the anatomy because you've got some good stuff going but there are also a few things you're missing.

So I'll start with front (anterior) view. I like that you clearly mark the clavicle, and sternum. You've missed the third origin of the pectorals major that attaches to tendon around the fifth rib.

You haven't really drawn the external obliques. They attach by the anterior superior iliac spine but you've drawn them so they attach somewhere near the pubis bone. The external oblique is a teardrop shape and is very easy to spot when looking at anatomy plates. The little bit you sometimes see moving down the anterior superior iliac spine is the internal oblique, a separate muscle.

The abdomens rectus is a little weird in shape. It tapers as it reaches the ribs and costal cartilage and it's never perfectly symmetrical. Also, the last portion of the abdominis rectus doesn't have much of a separation down the centre line. It's often seen as one big muscle rather than two.

The back (posterior) view is where I have a bigger issue. You need to do just like what you did with the sternum and clavicle. You need to mark the landmarks and work from there. The most important landmark is the scapula. Then from there you can attach the trapezius, deltoid, infraspinatus, teres major/minor and rhomboid. You also have a tendency to miss the seventh cervical vertebra and to make the tendon of the trapezius very small.

The trapezius doesn't curve in and then out to go around the scapula. It's a muscle that sits on top of all other muscles and it has a tendency to slip over the scapula, making a continuos line down to the thoracic vertebra.

The posterior head of the deltoid is mostly tendon. This is common to miss but it only gets its muscle fibres when it reaches the rest of the deltoid muscle. Apart from that, there's just a bunch of flat fibres attaching it to the scapula.

The latissimus dorsi has a huge area of tendon where it attaches to the lumbar vertebra. It also sits over all other back muscles so when you draw the teres major, draw it beneath the latissimus dorsi. The latissimus dorsi attaches down by the iliac and the sacrum so make sure it attaches over everything else.

I won't get into the limbs because I think I've taken up enough of your thread (and I need to study them more to be able to feel comfortable critiquing them in-depth). Keep on working! and feel free to check out the Crimson Cadavers group for help with anatomy http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/showthre...6#pid85486

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