Victor wants to CREATE!
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(10-09-2015, 06:48 AM)RottenPocket Wrote: Hey Victor,

Going off what you've said about not knowing where to improve and struggling to give volume to your pieces, I would say try to hone down the hatching. 

Hatching can be your greatest friend or your worst enemy. In these ink drawings there's a hint at where you want the shadows to be but most of the hatching is placed along the length and breadth of the shapes - more like you're just filling up blank space than considering the shapes themselves. More importantly texture is what gives an image that further sense of form. The shape and density of hatching you use shouldn't be the same for the whole drawing - it will remain flat. 

I hope that gives you an idea. Here's one of the oldest examples if ink drawing and woodcut etching - Albrect Druer:

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Hey RottenPocket,

Thanks for the critique! Yeah I feel that my ink drawings are really dirty, that's not the way I want to go, I'll try to reduce the number of hatching and apply what you said, thanks a bunch! :D
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