THE CRIMSON CADAVERS
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Amit - Looks great, man! Love seeing you posting in the group.
I've also had a lot of issues just trying to figure out what I'm looking at. I'm going to wear out my "Artistic Anatomy" book because I'm also flipping through the pages constantly to try check everything. 

Your studies are so good so my critique do require me to spend quite a bit of time thinking and checking if things are correct or not ;) I'm very bad at arms and legs so I'll just talk about the torso. 

To begin, the latissimus dorsi is a bit wider than what you've drawn. You have this big area of tendon where it attaches to the spine and iliac and it creates this diamond shape that you can spot on well developed people. This is a way to get the position/width of it and from there you can sort of draw it more accurately. 

The external obliques are a little vague. In the paintover you can see how they move back towards the ribs. They tend to move backwards rather than straight up. If you look at a anatomical plate from the side, they have a strong backwards tilt. I am not entirely sure what happens when the figure leans forward, maybe they straighten out a bit but there are still muscle fibres originating next to the abs that they attach to the side ribs. 

Over at the scapula the posterior head of the deltoid actually attaches over the entire top spine of the scapula. It's just a bunch of tendons so there's no real muscle mass there. The infraspinatus doesn't cover the terras major, they meet at their origins so they create a V shape between them rather than one covering the other. In the study the infraspinatus is wrapping over the terras major. 

Now this is nit-picking but we see a little of the pectoralis major and it inserts exclusively to the humerus. You've drawn the fibres a little as if they re-attach to the ribs. You can see how I changed this in the paintover. 

Anyway, this is still a great study! I'm just being picky ^^ 




Olooriel - Cool stuff! Drawing the skeleton is tricky because it requires you to do a lot of deducing. You kinda have to be an anatomical detective, looking for clues before you make conclusions or reasonable inferences. 

What I suggest is that you try to be a bit more careful about marking your landmarks. You mark them a bit loosely and make a few conclusions that aren't really there. One example is that the clavicle on the right side. The sternocleidomastoid muscles attaches to the clavicle so you can use it as a guide to see where it begins. You drew the clavicle before the muscle ends so this is one of the places it is off. 

In things like the arms, it looks like you drew the line for the humerus and ulna a little arbitrarily. Check out the resource section. I added a link to a document with all the anatomical landmarks. I think it can be helpful if you print them out and keep them as reference. 

Spend a bit more time on those things and try to be as accurate as you can be :)



Alright, so here is something I did this morning. I'm going to spend this week working on arms because man, I'm bad at them... 



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THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 07-14-2015, 10:20 PM
RE: The Crimson Cadavers - by Tristan Berndt - 07-14-2015, 10:21 PM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 07-15-2015, 03:32 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 07-15-2015, 08:48 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by ZombieChinchilla - 07-15-2015, 10:52 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 07-15-2015, 08:34 PM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Adam Lina - 07-16-2015, 01:29 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 07-16-2015, 02:23 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by KurtJeremy - 07-16-2015, 11:12 PM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 07-17-2015, 01:12 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Spellsword95 - 07-17-2015, 05:16 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 07-18-2015, 04:41 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Spellsword95 - 07-18-2015, 06:28 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Foxy_grandpa235 - 07-18-2015, 11:23 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by EliasM - 07-18-2015, 11:56 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 07-19-2015, 02:25 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Amit Dutta - 07-19-2015, 11:31 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Olooriel - 07-20-2015, 05:24 PM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Amit Dutta - 07-21-2015, 08:44 PM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 07-22-2015, 12:47 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 07-22-2015, 04:15 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Amit Dutta - 07-22-2015, 07:50 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Adam Lina - 07-22-2015, 03:28 PM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 07-23-2015, 01:58 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Adam Lina - 07-23-2015, 02:34 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by EliasM - 07-23-2015, 05:03 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 07-23-2015, 05:26 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Amit Dutta - 07-23-2015, 07:19 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 07-23-2015, 07:55 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Olooriel - 07-23-2015, 08:05 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Adam Lina - 07-23-2015, 08:13 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Amit Dutta - 07-23-2015, 08:38 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Amit Dutta - 07-23-2015, 11:00 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by KurtJeremy - 07-24-2015, 02:45 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 07-24-2015, 04:42 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 07-24-2015, 09:17 PM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Adam Lina - 07-24-2015, 11:20 PM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by appleseed00 - 07-25-2015, 10:25 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Grieverjoe - 07-26-2015, 04:49 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by appleseed00 - 07-26-2015, 09:36 PM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 07-29-2015, 01:10 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by appleseed00 - 07-29-2015, 09:29 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Olooriel - 07-31-2015, 07:12 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by appleseed00 - 08-05-2015, 09:24 PM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Olooriel - 08-06-2015, 12:15 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by appleseed00 - 08-06-2015, 01:12 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Adam Lina - 08-06-2015, 07:05 AM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Bookend - 08-24-2015, 10:57 PM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Amit Dutta - 08-27-2015, 09:29 PM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by appleseed00 - 09-02-2015, 09:48 PM
RE: THE CRIMSON CADAVERS - by Tristan Berndt - 10-03-2015, 06:23 AM
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