The Velvet Revolvers

[Jeso]

Richie: Welcome to TVR!  Haha.  Your figures look great-- Glad to see you're starting to construct the figure from the inside out!  


Here's my progress with the Environment mentorship (I almost wrote Enlightenment...  I'm guessing this is foreshadowing? )

Hey Book, About your progress on the Ammits class thing. I really dig the black and white mass studies, But there is a major fault happening on the value studies you've made. You gotta separate your scenes on 3 chunks of space. Back ground, middle ground and fore ground. Each of these have their respective value range division. In your comps, there is usually only 2 value groups, foreground and middle ground. Your value range is all mixed up between back ground and middle groun is the same range. So, you can lower the background value range to add depth to the comps. '

Keep em coming.


JOSE- Watch the values budy, you'r value issue is a tad different from Book, There is only the one value study you did of that landscape black and white. You have blobs of black all over the thing, regardless of back ground or foreground. You cant have such dark values in the back, its gonna flatten things out. Just pay attention to the values in the squarish mountain or whatever the heck it is in the middle ground. There is no black in that, but yours is ridden with blacks. So just watch out for values.

Triggerpicking-

Buddy that's some good practice right there. Structural mannequin like studies, that's gonna help you a ton down the line.