The Velvet Revolvers

[Jeso]

Hey Snipa, nice study, I like the colors, they all have a nice blend of gray to them.
The image feels too flat though, not a lot of atmospheric perspective going on in there. Also the rocks look like stickers on a painting. They lack volume, You could study a rock by itself, instead of a full environment, and study how volume works in it. Look at the planes, and how light falls in each plane. You were kind of doing that on the top rock, but not quiet. Also the edges in the rocks are whats messing the up the most. Those super sharp edges automatically eliminate any kind of perception of volume in a form. Turns completely flat like a sticker.

I think something that would really help you would be doing still life drawing. Draw a sphere in your desk, render out the form, key word : FORM, how does light falls on an voluminous object.

And yea, good luck!