The Velvet Revolvers

[Jeso]

Eyliana- I like that you are trying to be structural with your heads and sketch out the whole thing before placing face features. So That is good, I just think you need to obverse more carefully, measure even, proportions a little more carefully. Many of the heads you drew, the water color one even, have skewed features. So, look out for that. The water color painting has lovely colors!

Veronica- Cool, I like the one with green hair. Is there something in specific you are aiming at with your art? Usually people in here just want to get better at drawing and painting realistically to get into the entertainment industry. But its a bit hard to critique when we dont know where you are going. Because of the work you usually do, I'm not sure.
I think you said you just wanted to do commissions for ever? Then you gotta think, about medium, what kind of work you want to get commissioned to do, and things like that. You also want to think about whats marketable, Will they buy it? Do people buy this? things like that...