08-09-2016, 08:42 AM
Hey John! Love this last piece, specially the head of the girl, as her expression.
I would however make a few reccomendations to pop out the piece;
1) Work on the values of the girl, creating more contrast and pop her out more from the background, or, work on an analogous, or split complementary pallete to create familiarity between the hues.
2) Compositionwise i think her weight on the right side needs some counter balance on the left, which can be translated either as emphasis on the value or hue, or with a new element.
Don´t quit on that image John, with some touches it can be a very good piece, and trust me, i know too well what is the feeling of just getting tired of an image and working and reworking it haha.
Hope it helps! Cheers!!
I would however make a few reccomendations to pop out the piece;
1) Work on the values of the girl, creating more contrast and pop her out more from the background, or, work on an analogous, or split complementary pallete to create familiarity between the hues.
2) Compositionwise i think her weight on the right side needs some counter balance on the left, which can be translated either as emphasis on the value or hue, or with a new element.
Don´t quit on that image John, with some touches it can be a very good piece, and trust me, i know too well what is the feeling of just getting tired of an image and working and reworking it haha.
Hope it helps! Cheers!!