10-13-2017, 05:12 PM
nice piece bro
i have to go out but wanted to make a few small suggestions
the butterfly looks a little large to the point its distracting as an element of the piece
popped a tad more light on the skull
altered her angle a little bit to satisfy my eye a bit more
her shirt area was creating too much or a stiff rectangle area i thought
gave her a thumb cos the way she was holding the gun felt a lil off to me
not sure who the character is so not sure what the expression was supposed to show so just altered it a bit.
the tongue was a bit miley cyris and the teeth didnt look like they were making contact with it so much so i tried to make it a lil more natural but this was done real quick so dont have to take it so serious.
made the shadows contrast a bit more and thinned her face a tad
also just added some butterfly dust for people to read meaning into.. blood spray or what have you.
anyway, good stuff!
![[Image: po_by_andrew_gibbons-dbqewqq.jpg]](https://orig00.deviantart.net/d518/f/2017/286/b/8/po_by_andrew_gibbons-dbqewqq.jpg)
i have to go out but wanted to make a few small suggestions
the butterfly looks a little large to the point its distracting as an element of the piece
popped a tad more light on the skull
altered her angle a little bit to satisfy my eye a bit more
her shirt area was creating too much or a stiff rectangle area i thought
gave her a thumb cos the way she was holding the gun felt a lil off to me
not sure who the character is so not sure what the expression was supposed to show so just altered it a bit.
the tongue was a bit miley cyris and the teeth didnt look like they were making contact with it so much so i tried to make it a lil more natural but this was done real quick so dont have to take it so serious.
made the shadows contrast a bit more and thinned her face a tad
also just added some butterfly dust for people to read meaning into.. blood spray or what have you.
anyway, good stuff!