BrushNoir Sketchbook
Hi Brush! The initial sketches look wonderful. Not really a critique (since it's too early in the stage to tell and you might have the same reservations as I do), but more of a reminder of sorts... or advice... or both!

An old artist I know imparted this old adage that went like: "If you're going to focus your work on something, work on these three things: the face and the hands... Those are the three things people notice and nitpick almost immediately."

I remember he said three. I'm so much of a dolt that forgot the other one. 

Anywho. To my point. Your hands seem to need a little bit of love. Again, I realize it's still in its early stages and for all I know it might just be a placeholder.

I hope you don't mind the quick and crude red-lining.


I suggest pulling out a mirror to get the hand you need for the illustration. Better yet, find a good reference picture. Like a good, slim, lady-like hands, and morph it in such a way it looks like this creature's.

The piece is shaping up well! Looking forward to the progress!

If you are reading this, I most likely just gave you a crappy crit! What I'm basically trying to say is, don't give up!  
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BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-03-2016, 10:46 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Piotr Jasielski - 03-03-2016, 11:41 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-03-2016, 11:59 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-06-2016, 06:58 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by S4MURAI_CAT - 03-06-2016, 05:34 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-06-2016, 09:09 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-07-2016, 10:09 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BlackDelphin - 03-08-2016, 05:04 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-08-2016, 08:24 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-08-2016, 11:55 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-09-2016, 12:03 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BlackDelphin - 03-09-2016, 12:18 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-09-2016, 09:15 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-10-2016, 12:30 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Adzerak - 03-11-2016, 01:11 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-11-2016, 01:56 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by PurpleScissors - 03-11-2016, 03:17 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-11-2016, 03:38 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-11-2016, 12:51 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by PurpleScissors - 03-11-2016, 01:57 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-11-2016, 09:07 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-12-2016, 12:27 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Amit Dutta - 03-12-2016, 09:36 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-13-2016, 12:01 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-13-2016, 01:45 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-14-2016, 11:26 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by neopatogen - 03-15-2016, 02:40 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-15-2016, 04:48 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-15-2016, 12:33 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Liberty - 03-15-2016, 01:23 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-15-2016, 01:35 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by ZombieChinchilla - 03-15-2016, 08:34 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-15-2016, 09:32 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-16-2016, 12:22 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Eyliana - 03-16-2016, 01:06 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by AChi - 03-16-2016, 02:34 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-16-2016, 09:13 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by browneye - 03-17-2016, 10:46 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-17-2016, 12:49 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-18-2016, 12:10 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-19-2016, 12:52 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-21-2016, 11:30 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Ren - 03-22-2016, 09:27 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-22-2016, 10:10 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-23-2016, 12:13 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Rakif - 03-23-2016, 09:27 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-23-2016, 10:29 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Rakif - 03-24-2016, 12:46 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-24-2016, 11:34 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by DQ_Nick - 03-24-2016, 09:02 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-24-2016, 10:32 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-25-2016, 01:01 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Rakif - 03-25-2016, 01:40 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by crackedskull - 03-26-2016, 05:23 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Pukrolli - 03-26-2016, 08:36 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-27-2016, 06:34 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by DQ_Nick - 03-27-2016, 09:48 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-27-2016, 12:40 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-28-2016, 09:42 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-28-2016, 01:08 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-29-2016, 11:26 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-30-2016, 06:48 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by neopatogen - 03-30-2016, 07:33 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Arapersonica - 03-30-2016, 08:43 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-30-2016, 10:11 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 03-31-2016, 10:04 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 04-02-2016, 12:13 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Lussios - 04-03-2016, 12:28 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 04-04-2016, 11:20 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BjorkJT - 04-04-2016, 12:52 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 04-04-2016, 09:50 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Piotr Jasielski - 04-05-2016, 02:09 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 04-05-2016, 02:14 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 04-06-2016, 08:59 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 04-08-2016, 11:45 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 04-11-2016, 12:11 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by newl - 04-12-2016, 08:57 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 04-15-2016, 11:46 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 04-18-2016, 10:05 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by crackedskull - 04-19-2016, 03:11 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by JyonnyNovice - 04-24-2016, 03:22 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 04-24-2016, 08:18 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Arapersonica - 04-30-2016, 04:44 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 04-30-2016, 06:49 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by smrr - 05-01-2016, 06:19 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 05-11-2016, 12:00 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Arapersonica - 05-11-2016, 12:48 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Eyliana - 05-11-2016, 12:50 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 05-11-2016, 01:00 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by JyonnyNovice - 05-11-2016, 01:10 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 05-11-2016, 01:19 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Artloader - 05-11-2016, 08:53 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by JyonnyNovice - 05-11-2016, 10:00 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Eyliana - 05-12-2016, 06:19 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by neopatogen - 05-16-2016, 02:09 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 05-16-2016, 03:46 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 06-03-2016, 08:46 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Piotr Jasielski - 06-04-2016, 12:22 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by neopatogen - 06-04-2016, 12:29 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by John - 06-04-2016, 07:13 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 06-04-2016, 08:55 PM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 06-08-2016, 12:03 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by Eyliana - 06-08-2016, 12:15 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by BrushNoir - 06-08-2016, 12:25 AM
RE: BrushNoir Sketchbook - by imPhelikz - 11-26-2016, 06:53 PM

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