10-29-2020, 08:29 AM
Really digging the logo design! In terms of crit, the main thing would be to make sure it reads on mobile devices. You can see the details on a computer screen, but not so much on a phone. This largely has to do with values and details being too similar in value to the surroundings that they disappear. Like the knot-work under VALLEY can barely be seen. The markings on the rock and the rock face don't stand out as much as they could (and based off the name 'the secret valley' it feels you should lean into these 'mysterious' objects more)
Consider playing around with the sizing of the flowers too. In the left one the red and blue flowers are the same size, despite them not being the same type. Could be more visually interesting if they weren't all the same size (think big - medium - small shapes)
I hope that helps. I think you did nail your keyword of colourful and fun, but there's plenty of room to push it
Consider playing around with the sizing of the flowers too. In the left one the red and blue flowers are the same size, despite them not being the same type. Could be more visually interesting if they weren't all the same size (think big - medium - small shapes)
I hope that helps. I think you did nail your keyword of colourful and fun, but there's plenty of room to push it