Zorrentos Sketchbook

[chubby_cat]

The character's rendering/style looks really good! In terms of the presentation, the text under Sir Mittens III is quite hard to read. It's alright if you have the image at full screen, but in the size above it kinda blurs together. I would also suggest playing around with the sizes and placement of the text and Secret Valley logo. Everything is close together and almost makes the image feel claustrophobic. The characters need to 'breathe' a bit more and dominate the space imo (like if you compare the characters to the logo they are almost the same size, and the logo is brighter and colourful so your eye is naturally drawn to that first)

Hope that helps!