01-12-2021, 09:48 AM
I like the overall character design. Even though its a pretty simple character it definitely conveys the "war dog" vibe through his expression and the moustache (kind of gives him a macho look I). The story is pretty cute and funny as well :) Like chubby_cat mentioned I would consider doing something to the text to make it easier to read, I think the font, color, and size are all kind of working against the clarity. The shadows of the text make them harder to read because the letter kind of run together, and the white letters are a bit close to the background color also at the top. As another suggestion maybe consider aligning the text to form a shape around the toy kitten's head so that they dont get so close to it.
Nice work on this project so far, I really like where it's going! You may have said this already earlier in the thread but is The Secret Valley a personal project of yours or professional work? Do you already have a full background story/spec or are you making it up as you go?
Nice work on this project so far, I really like where it's going! You may have said this already earlier in the thread but is The Secret Valley a personal project of yours or professional work? Do you already have a full background story/spec or are you making it up as you go?