10-04-2016, 02:37 AM
Nice one Jon! But you could do a few things to improve it IMO.
You have used the same kind of "rendering" (idk how else to say it) on the dark part of her hair and the ink bottle (the "zigzagging"). I think you should try to actually draw strands of hair and render them darkly when they are in the shadow. Take a look at how pro artists do it. Here is an example from vinland saga: http://i41.tinypic.com/2s1lsw1.jpg
My inktober drawing for today: A girl and her cat.
![[Image: 4IhmedQ.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/4IhmedQ.jpg)
You have used the same kind of "rendering" (idk how else to say it) on the dark part of her hair and the ink bottle (the "zigzagging"). I think you should try to actually draw strands of hair and render them darkly when they are in the shadow. Take a look at how pro artists do it. Here is an example from vinland saga: http://i41.tinypic.com/2s1lsw1.jpg
My inktober drawing for today: A girl and her cat.