kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd
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I think the pose you drew is inherently stiff, it would even be in a photo of someone in that stance. I made you a few notes here, I see you are trying to do something dynamic here, but I'm gonna provide you a few examples so you know what I'm talking about

low shot
http://algenpfleger.deviantart.com/art/M...-539346385
http://algenpfleger.deviantart.com/art/M...-542484948

At height
http://robrey.deviantart.com/art/Observation-534626678
http://maciejkuciara.deviantart.com/art/...-526007078

Avove
http://robrey.deviantart.com/art/Heliosphere-544711552
http://madspartan013.deviantart.com/art/...-543969234

TILT
http://6kart.deviantart.com/art/Dragon-Hunter-514106067
http://rossdraws.deviantart.com/art/Red-538442797

Doesn't mean these will always be the best fit for any situation, BUT! to show a dynamic scene like yours, there's gotta be a lot more dynamics in the camera, as well as the pose. Also avoid big squares in the composition, i mean doing only flat square shapes. Let me know if anything I'm saying doesn't make sense, I'm having trouble putting it into words..


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kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 02-07-2017, 04:30 PM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by Axrel - 02-08-2017, 02:20 PM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 02-09-2017, 04:25 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by Axrel - 02-09-2017, 01:26 PM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by vennsomn - 02-10-2017, 04:25 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by Artloader - 02-10-2017, 09:35 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 02-11-2017, 09:35 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by vennsomn - 02-13-2017, 03:54 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 02-14-2017, 03:17 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by Artloader - 02-14-2017, 09:20 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 02-17-2017, 03:32 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by vennsomn - 02-17-2017, 04:08 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 02-18-2017, 05:10 PM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by Fedodika - 02-19-2017, 01:15 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 02-21-2017, 09:57 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 02-25-2017, 06:34 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 03-01-2017, 05:45 PM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by Fedodika - 03-02-2017, 12:01 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 03-04-2017, 04:25 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by Fedodika - 03-04-2017, 05:13 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by VoodooMama - 03-08-2017, 02:28 PM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by Hozure - 03-09-2017, 08:07 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by Zipfelzeus - 03-10-2017, 09:28 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 03-10-2017, 10:11 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by Fedodika - 03-10-2017, 10:51 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 03-16-2017, 06:03 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 07-23-2020, 05:07 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by ognjiša - 07-23-2020, 05:53 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by xelfereht - 07-23-2020, 03:43 PM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by xelfereht - 07-23-2020, 04:35 PM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by xelfereht - 07-23-2020, 08:04 PM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 07-24-2020, 09:12 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by Jalmon - 07-26-2020, 06:17 PM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 07-27-2020, 05:30 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by chubby_cat - 07-28-2020, 02:33 PM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 08-04-2020, 10:51 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 09-19-2020, 06:24 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 09-19-2020, 06:27 AM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by Rotohail - 09-26-2020, 07:46 PM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by cgmythology - 09-29-2020, 06:35 PM
RE: kvSketch Learns to Get Gewd - by kvSketch - 10-01-2020, 03:51 AM
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