Making a graphic novel / manga
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One part of a hanging often forgotten about is that the crowd is there for entertainment purposes. Jeering could be added, laughter,...

Depending on the tone of the story, these could be an alternative caption:
"In the name of the people // I pronounce you... // DEAD!!"

In short, more pages/storytelling is needed if we are to advise.
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RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Fickleflame - 06-17-2020, 08:00 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Leo Ki - 06-22-2020, 10:54 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Shuty - 07-16-2020, 02:57 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Zorrentos - 07-31-2020, 04:08 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Zorrentos - 08-01-2020, 03:37 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Zorrentos - 08-21-2020, 06:45 PM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 08-25-2020, 11:25 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 09-04-2020, 07:17 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 09-04-2020, 12:22 PM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 09-05-2020, 02:50 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Zorrentos - 09-07-2020, 05:14 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 09-10-2020, 08:27 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by JosephCow - 09-10-2020, 03:21 PM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by JosephCow - 09-18-2020, 09:42 AM

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