Making a graphic novel / manga
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(06-19-2020, 05:48 AM)Fickleflame Wrote: There's a flaw with the floor ^^
My initial interpretation of the water was that it was ground. Maybe you can do something to make it more sea-like? If this is going to be coloured you need not bother.

Do you think this coloring is better?
I am unsure about sea white and ground grey or ground grey and sea white.
Also, did you mean with the first sentence that the horizon line is wrong? (I made a correct perspective grid, so the perspective can not really be off, but maybe the mountains are wrong if I set them on top of the horizon line?)

Is the part i marked in red wrong somehow??


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RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by graphicnovelist - 06-19-2020, 08:30 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Leo Ki - 06-22-2020, 10:54 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Shuty - 07-16-2020, 02:57 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Zorrentos - 07-31-2020, 04:08 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Zorrentos - 08-01-2020, 03:37 AM
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RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 08-25-2020, 11:25 AM
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RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 09-05-2020, 02:50 AM
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