Making a graphic novel / manga
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There's nothing wrong with the perspective I think. The mountains (or at least part of them) would be on top of the horizon line as long as they're above the level of the viewer's eyeballs.

I think making the water darker than the city street was the right choice. I suggest making the water in the distance darker as well, and/or add reflections of the mountains to make it obvious that it's water. The only issue is that the distant water is almost the same gray as the city street, and there are no details to tell us that it's water, so it reads as being part of the city. Alternatively, add details to the city street so that it's obviously not part of the distant water. But just making the water consistently darker would be an acceptable solution.
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RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Pubic Enemy - 06-19-2020, 10:52 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Leo Ki - 06-22-2020, 10:54 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Shuty - 07-16-2020, 02:57 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Zorrentos - 07-31-2020, 04:08 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Zorrentos - 08-01-2020, 03:37 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Zorrentos - 08-21-2020, 06:45 PM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 08-25-2020, 11:25 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 09-04-2020, 07:17 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 09-04-2020, 12:22 PM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 09-05-2020, 02:50 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Zorrentos - 09-07-2020, 05:14 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 09-10-2020, 08:27 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by JosephCow - 09-10-2020, 03:21 PM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by JosephCow - 09-18-2020, 09:42 AM

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