Making a graphic novel / manga
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(06-20-2020, 11:11 PM)graphicnovelist Wrote: In the background there is no water. Its more like grasslands or something. So maybe I should indicate that by putting some trees here and there, okay!
The straight line looks like the horizon on the sea. Make it more natural, slightly hilly maybe?
I like the humorous tone of page 3 - I hadn't guessed it from the previous pages. If this is the tone of the whole story, you may want to consider making it clear from page 1?

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RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Leo Ki - 06-22-2020, 10:54 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Shuty - 07-16-2020, 02:57 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Zorrentos - 07-31-2020, 04:08 AM
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RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 08-25-2020, 11:25 AM
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