Making a graphic novel / manga
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(08-21-2020, 06:45 PM)Zorrentos Wrote: A clear improvement over the previous pages.

Here are some useful links and reading that may help you. I especially recommend the second link (scroll down a bit to get to the bit about composition and placement)

Thanks! I went though a part of it, but it was so much, that it can not be done in one session. I will go through more of it in the future.
I read the part about the line of action, I get the impression, that its not always good to have a strong line of action, it seems to me the stronger the line of action, the cartoonier the figure looks.
But its definitely something to experiment with.

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Here we have the next page.

It has no improved techniques like leading the eye, not even good camera-placement, but I want to push the story a little bit, until I finally finish chapter 1 (which means page 20-30). I already lined up several pages in not-so-advanced-style.

Page 11 Version 1




Oh yeah, and here a little concept of the merchant.



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RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Leo Ki - 06-22-2020, 10:54 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Shuty - 07-16-2020, 02:57 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Zorrentos - 07-31-2020, 04:08 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Zorrentos - 08-01-2020, 03:37 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Zorrentos - 08-21-2020, 06:45 PM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by graphicnovelist - 08-25-2020, 07:19 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 08-25-2020, 11:25 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 09-04-2020, 07:17 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 09-04-2020, 12:22 PM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 09-05-2020, 02:50 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by Zorrentos - 09-07-2020, 05:14 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by darktiste - 09-10-2020, 08:27 AM
RE: Making a graphic novel / manga - by JosephCow - 09-10-2020, 03:21 PM
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