01-31-2021, 09:42 AM
I think the problem for me with the composition is how it look like the scene is inside a theater you got the foreground with the rock.But it as if the forest is just painted there on some kind of wall that would be behind the rock.I think it a matter of first of all not showing a horizon line and secondo it a problem of not giving enough cue for depth such as overlap and atmospheric perspective.A good way to create depth is to create a succession of overlapping mountain.For me the issue here is how you made that slop in the middle ground and than your background is on the other side of that slope with no depth there because the tree just become a united blury mass.A good thing would be to erase a few of those tree and let the eye get lost in the distance.In term of compositon you get us really where you want us to look at you use some good framing there with the element inside the scene.For me what doesn't work is the horizontal canva it just leave to much space empty for my personal taste but it sure give the feel of wilderness if that what you were going for.
I took the liberty to crop the original and try to cut out the unnecessary and get down to the action and story.It ok to crop part of the character if it help you get ''better'' composition sure there might be some element you want to include like the gun which might have a importance so include it.Somehow cropping is feet made the scene more believable and there isn't that much emptyness anymore in the foreground that make it look like a theater play.
I took the liberty to crop the original and try to cut out the unnecessary and get down to the action and story.It ok to crop part of the character if it help you get ''better'' composition sure there might be some element you want to include like the gun which might have a importance so include it.Somehow cropping is feet made the scene more believable and there isn't that much emptyness anymore in the foreground that make it look like a theater play.
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