crit please !
#1
Rainbow 
Hello ! Id like to get some critique to push this piece further. Im not really happy with it at the moment.

Thanks !

[Image: wop1.jpg]
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#2
Problemareas and paintover. Basicly you should push the "depth" in it a bit more. And being more precise in your renderingstyle and less loose would make the picture more tight.
[Image: 20f3h8l.jpg]

Also, I'd leave out the plants and fix the perspective a little :) try make a separate layer w. your vanishing point etc.

Hope it helps

/B

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#3
thank you thats actually really helpfull !

here is an update ! [img][Image: wop12.jpg][/img]
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