30 Jun 18:12
--Oh yeah. The old panel layout really left a disgusting taste after you guys pointed out how confusing it was.
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30 Jun 18:12
--I agree. I work better with a collaborator. I do not like every piece of sequential I did alone haha!
30 Jun 18:09
--Also you didn't post the thing in it's entirety until the end...so nobody could give you feedback on the clarity part of the story
30 Jun 18:08
--I also think the arbitrary change in reading direction didn't help your cause much. I like the idea of reading direction changing with a major life event, but perhaps the flow needed to be much clearer.
30 Jun 17:55
--It's harder for me to do dialogues. I'll spend forever on rewrites and the panels will never stop changing haha!
30 Jun 17:49
--No worries John, thanks! there were some in the chat who read it that way, but yeah Clarity is so important, but you took on an even bigger challenge without text so awesome work!
30 Jun 17:37
--@Mech: That's tough.. It's really hard for me to keep the ball rolling.. I used to draw during late at night just to have that kind of peace. But your solution of drawing early in the morning works out best.
30 Jun 17:30
--@Amit: The domestic violence scene was supposed to be the main character in her bed crying while the fighting was going on. The gun scene was a random robbery. Oh god, I was cringing while you guys were taking it apart. Those two panels really broke the narrative.
30 Jun 17:06
--I'm gonna start getting up earlier than everyone else to get some uninterrupted hours. :-)
30 Jun 17:05
--Uuuuh, thought I'd get some interrupted time to draw this afternoon but nooooooooo...
30 Jun 14:21
--Respect. I have been where you are (not with a child) and it is hard to be running that cycle
30 Jun 13:46
--@John when you read this....everybody wanted to know the actual story in your comic..there was a bit of confusion. Tell us! :)
30 Jun 13:42
--Dude I thought you were showing me some music! Heheh - that guy's laugh is hilarious!
30 Jun 04:54
--I keep trying to set a 11:30pm cut off but it never happens - then I have to get up at 6:30am.
30 Jun 04:54
--Tell me about it! I'm continually battling sleep deprivation - not enough hours in the day!