Shout Box archive

29 Jun 15:22

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I'm spending so much time on my construction right now lol

29 Jun 15:22

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yes that too

29 Jun 15:22

OtherMuzz

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i'll say the same thing i say to everyone. You need to start drawing characters properly in perspective

29 Jun 15:22

Jan Kloidt

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and get my own domain for the next go

29 Jun 15:22

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also another thing I was told to do: show you thumbnails, show you little thoughts you have of the design

29 Jun 15:22

Jan Kloidt

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and i'll try to tie it together more

29 Jun 15:21

Jan Kloidt

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yeah, i'll do that!

29 Jun 15:21

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of the characters and environments

29 Jun 15:21

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I do like the presentation of the cutaway environments and stuff but the level of detail could be higher maybe do some painterly just to show that you can push it that far

29 Jun 15:20

OtherMuzz

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at this stage i would rather just an art station link

29 Jun 15:20

OtherMuzz

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First thoughts/ Get a nicer website.

29 Jun 15:20

Jan Kloidt

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hm they were meant to be tho, jsut from different corners of the same world

29 Jun 15:20

OtherMuzz

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Mornin yall

29 Jun 15:19

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they dont feel like theyre part of one story or timeline

29 Jun 15:19

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It feels like the same thing Fengs students told me about my portfolio there isnt reall any consistency in the designs

29 Jun 15:19

Brian Hermelijn

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Yeah. That was my impression as well.

29 Jun 15:18

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from my first impressions on your portfolio I think the art direction is a little confusing. I see hints of norse influence with the house, then theres the spaniard guy in the green and the viking guys in the red, and the space ship out of nowhere

29 Jun 15:18

Jan Kloidt

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lol totally forgot that i put those portraits in there

29 Jun 15:17

Jan Kloidt

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i dont really know whats wrong with it, is it just the level of finish or the website or the ideas..

29 Jun 15:16

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thats waht im going for too Jan but more game studio focused

29 Jun 15:16

Jan Kloidt

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or whatever else the stuff in it could be used for that i dont know about yet

29 Jun 15:15

Jan Kloidt

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i wanted it to be a design folio for games when i made it, but i'm also open for rpg books or miniatures etc

29 Jun 15:15

Brian Hermelijn

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I meant @Jan.

29 Jun 15:15

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you mean what I want in my portfolio Hermi?

29 Jun 15:14

Jan Kloidt

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https://jankloidt.wordpress.com/

29 Jun 15:14

Brian Hermelijn

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Actually what do you want in your portfolio

29 Jun 15:14

Brian Hermelijn

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Have no idea what to say about that @Jan, maybe ask Piotr/Muzz or Nicho?

29 Jun 15:14

Jan Kloidt

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right now its all lines, i feel like thats not enough... not sure if the ideas suck too

29 Jun 15:14

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send me a link Jan

29 Jun 15:14

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peace Amit

29 Jun 15:13

Jan Kloidt

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btw can someone give me a hint about what to do with my folio? i wanna take the best stuff from it and render it out, not sure what to take or who to target with it or if i should just start from scratch

29 Jun 15:13

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Yeah Hermi thats what im doing now I havent shown this work to anyone but I really like the direction im going with it