17 Apr 12:12
--sup man
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17 Apr 08:47
--nice video, i find it hard to explain life drawing to non artists that have never even heard of the practice.
17 Apr 03:53
--Wow Meat, that animation was incredible. I thought it captured the essence of life drawing well.
17 Apr 02:00
--its just too chaotic right now but if you put more effort into making it simpler it could work a lot better
17 Apr 01:59
--well so far the feedback i recieved tells me that this picture fails as a narrative and is not clear
17 Apr 01:57
--i think ill keep this version for myself and finish it on my own time time to think of a new comp
17 Apr 01:57
--yeah i like it too but its just so damn hard to make sense of in a single cinematic frame
17 Apr 01:56
--I like the slanted floor idea...it is interesting, if you can make it work.
17 Apr 01:56
--and i think the brief says something about statues so you can get rid of the hands on the right side and put some statues left and right and in the foreground to frame the ceremony and get more depth
17 Apr 01:54
--Or do what Jan said, which will be a more static before shit goes down moment
17 Apr 01:54
--things is the drawing is on a single layer if i start deleting stuff it will become a mess
17 Apr 01:53
--The cultists are too static....make it as if they realised what they did and are freaking out....except for maybe one....who is about to get made into a meat pie
17 Apr 01:53
--i would do this to your image: get rid of that column and the dude in the foreground and instead get the monster in the middle of the comp with everyone just kneeling around him and pulling their arms in the air. and just do a normal horizontal floor
17 Apr 01:52
--Chill. Don't trash it...make it work better. You have to be able to recognize what works and what doesn't