30 Mar 01:46
--ahh so i should have introduced some sort of secondary light source so the inside of the figure would feel more dimensional
30 Mar 01:46
--ahh so i should have introduced some sort of secondary light source so the inside of the figure would feel more dimensional
30 Mar 01:46
--The bg seems a little closer than it might be, because the value and kore importantly contrast is very similar to the rest of the piece.
30 Mar 01:45
--Ok so one example with values in yours. The entire figure of tywin melds a little with the background. Also, within, we can't sense depth of his arm holding the glass because it is the same broad value as the rest of the figure
30 Mar 01:40
--ahh so my value structure was off in that sense that the division of light and shadow wasn't consistent
30 Mar 01:39
--A good way to think about values is in large general areas, rather than the bits that might vary within
30 Mar 01:38
--I think the biggest thing really was composition...alex actually said a bit about it, but we kinda screwed the stream