(05-21-2018, 03:55 PM)cicakkia Wrote: Cool stuff. I really do like the flow you did on the brush :)

(05-22-2018, 12:15 AM)Fedodika Wrote: I think you'd benefit a bit from simplifying your brush strokes and making them larger and more focused, so I did an example. im not saying the end result should be this flat tiled look, just more to think in this way of simplifying the strokes, using a brush with 100% opacity to lay colors in carefully assigning a color to each plane individually then only if necessary, blending the edges together. IMO if you could indicate that neck with 4 brush strokes, but i see yours used about 12 or so. It ends up looking blurry and sloppy and you sacrifice edge control for a perceived effect of expressiveness.

maybe even try it in greyscale and see if you can manage it, i know how that mindset of texture brush works, it gives you lots of room for error because they can bleed into each other and it looking different may make it seem like that the planes are fitting together, but if you dont get it on a fundamental level, that wont save it. Love to see more and keep on truckin

(05-27-2018, 08:24 AM)darktiste Wrote: Well it alway a question of is this something you can get feedback on and almost alway the answers is yes so i don't see the benefit of not posting what you think could benefit from a critic.There alway something to learn at each stage of a drawing.Only posting finish work will not help you improve your approch.I remember when you were really against my critic i think it just show that you might have a resistance at showing unfinish work.I just hope you don't let the critic slow your progress.What is important is you push the quality to the best of your ability.

Not posting too sloppy work that you have the ability too improve.The problem is alway too determine what to post and what not to post.It easy to post sloppy study but how do you know it sloppy?That an other big question.You can't only post quality portfolio piece it not gonna help you progress in the study aspect.It also sometime bad to ask for a certain type of critic because you might not spot other problem a piece might have.

You have to practice good judgement.It sometime frustrating too be told that some of your work look sloppy it doesn't mean we should stop posting and only post master piece.