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RE: Danny's sketchbook - Fedodika - 04-05-2020
your stuff is looking pro dude, especially your most recent viking on instagram! Ive seen some advice youve been giving and ive been doing a similar thing myself, all about gesture and tacking tough forms like hands and stuff
I myself am going for a much more dynamic simple style for now until i get a good grasp over the foundational element of style and scene creation.
but yea fuck man, inspiring stuff! I'd keep working on faces... not so much proportions but like the gesture of faces.
http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachments/115579/2.jpg
this guy, like his face is straight on, you could have a heroic up tilt, to show more story there.
http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachments/115580/6.jpg
With her, you have a little tilt, but you could always push story, gesture, expression more. Right now her face feels like you did a straight on view, and tilted it a little, and her expression, seems like shes kind of uncomfortable instead of powerful.
This one however, is top notch
http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachments/115578/_olaf-2.jpg
Great pose, great energy, great values, great story! You could perhaps design that lightning to lead the eye even more, but this is a banger my dude nice piece@!! :D
RE: Danny's sketchbook - Gliger - 04-05-2020
those last 2 are *chef's kiss*
RE: Danny's sketchbook - Rotohail - 05-29-2020
Oh my! Tons of good stuff in here. The variety of it all! Amazing. The girl riding a bunny while they are munching on something really freaking awesome! From your latest update the thing that caught my eye is the guy that seems to be done in Darkest dungeon or that black inked comic book style, not sure if it has a name. Also, not sure if I'll bother you with this question, but did you do something between 2017 and 2020 tho? Did you take a break or go into hiatus?
I've to say you got a chuckle out of me with that getting good at critiquing ha ha ha. How did that happen?