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help me! drawings lifeless - nickzaart - 12-11-2017 Hi! I am Brazilian and new here so sorry for my English, I have difficult to finish my drawings, I take a long time in an art, and when I finish, I find them lifeless, I would like you to help me, this is my recent drawing. what do i have to improve? RE: help me! drawings lifeless - darktiste - 12-11-2017 The expression is not cartoonish enought in my opinion since you choose to draw it cartoony.I think you could come up with a lighting scenario that could be more impactful.I leave some example of some work you could get inspired by . RE: help me! drawings lifeless - nickzaart - 12-12-2017 thank you so much for the feedback! I will try to fix the mistakes you pointed!