Composition/Lighting Crit

[Mate]

Hey guys,

First time asking for a crit. early stages of a portfolio piece it's been a while since I've made a finished rendering and I'd really like to shoot for a WotC level illustration rendering. Any feedback to help my lighting situation or composition would be super welcome.

[Mike086]

okay so I streamed a paint over and talk about this piece for you.





Your paintover video

[Mate]

Thanks so much Miguel that was the most helpful and through painter anyones ever done for me. I'm working on the checklist now. Thanks for taking your time with it. I really appreciated it and I'll use that info.

I know the lighting is muddy and the anatomy is comic booked to all hell but just in terms of armor do you think it's too skimpy and would look to marvel swimsuitesq?

Again, thanks a ton Miguel!!!