04-24-2016, 01:44 AM
(04-23-2016, 11:41 PM)neopatogen Wrote:(04-23-2016, 11:15 PM)jackjones Wrote: The final piece not too happy with it I felt tlike it seemed a little rushed but the main points i want to fix looking at it now is:
-More clarity and better compostition need to do more comp studies
-story telling is not where I wanted it need to study more storytelling stuff like movie comps.
-Needs a bit more colour balance as it's too blue right now :/
I like the mood and the face! Though it doesn't feel very Bloodborne. You did a great job sketching, too!
This turned out really nice, has the mood and other things going for it. I have to say I liked your earlier mood and concept pieces a bit more though. Either way, well done, looking forward to seeing more of your work.