04-27-2016, 12:30 PM
To reiterate, the comp was just ok (could be improved, but simple enough to work) but it was the feeling of a clear narrative action moment which is what I was talking about really.
What really broke things was the lack of correct perspective and not having a bolder more constructed value structure. This is what you should be addressing in your thumbnails rather than just line drawing floating characters alone. Now you should see where you end up when you don't address the big problems up front. If you're learning the How to Draw stuff...USE it! Work smarter, not harder.
:)
Keep it going...and smrr, great stuff with the helps mate!
What really broke things was the lack of correct perspective and not having a bolder more constructed value structure. This is what you should be addressing in your thumbnails rather than just line drawing floating characters alone. Now you should see where you end up when you don't address the big problems up front. If you're learning the How to Draw stuff...USE it! Work smarter, not harder.
:)
Keep it going...and smrr, great stuff with the helps mate!