05-02-2016, 02:09 AM
Hi Janos! Love your work! The facial expression, the pose are super cool. If I may nitpick a bit, the line work might need a little bit of love. Thicker lines when the thing is in the forefront, thinner lines if it recedes back to the background. Thicker lines when an object casts a shadow (eg. the belt might need a thicker line at the bottom.) Thinner when it's catching light.
And boy can you render the hell out of anything. Inspiring stuff!
And boy can you render the hell out of anything. Inspiring stuff!
If you are reading this, I most likely just gave you a crappy crit! What I'm basically trying to say is, don't give up!
----
IG: @thatpuddinhead
----
IG: @thatpuddinhead