05-04-2016, 09:00 PM
Hi Yonderly. It seems you're struggling with anatomy in your pieces. Maybe it's a good idea to use references for the pose you have in mind to help make that thought in your head more concrete. It's only a Google away! Or you may visit one of these pose repositories on deviantart such as this: http://senshistock.deviantart.com/
If you are reading this, I most likely just gave you a crappy crit! What I'm basically trying to say is, don't give up!
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