Wicked sketchbook

[Lussios]

Hey Lussios, good start to your sketchbook. Keep up the good work.!  I have a little critique regarding your figure drawing. I have noticed you seem too be getting caught up in drawing the contour instead of drawing the gesture, one example is this figure drawing you did. 

I did a quick drawing over yours to show how you can maybe consider the gesture a bit more. I know its difficult to not to get caught up in drawing the anatomy straight away, but you should definitely try just drawing the gesture. Maybe time yourself... 1 or 2 minute poses. It would also be beneficial to try and draw more with your shoulder. This will help you draw much more fluid lines. But keep drawing man!   

Thank you for your suggestion and the time you spend on this over paint, I'll try to do this  1-2 min poses, right now I'm learning values. perspective, and composition  but I'll try to learn even more. :)