05-24-2016, 05:23 PM
@ Amit: You know, I totally agree about the animation thing... I'm thinking extending the canvas will be a good next step, and also introducing some warm colors too. And definitely gonna take a look at Atey, and clean up that background more; the BG was mostly for playing with, so I'll put more work into it! :D Thank you so much, you've helped me over the bump! XD
@ Piotr: Thank you so much! And yeah, I agree, I thought the highlights were kinda overkill too but I was on the fence... will definitely tone them down and add in some of those warm colors. Thank you so much! :D
@ Lodratio: Ohmisgosh, thank you so much for looking at that anatomy for me!!! And the paintover!! They already look better, and I really like the warm added in on the right. Seeing it that way puts a new perspective into it; thank you so so much for taking the time to look at it!!
I think the arm resting on the sword really takes away some of the awkwardness in the composition, it just felt unbalanced, but seeing it with his arm over the sword really works. Ahhh, thank you so very much! I'm gonna take it and shift it up this week--hopefully I can make the deadline long before instead of one hour out like my first one, haha!
Wow, thank you all so much for your thoughts, I really, really appreciate it! :D
@ Piotr: Thank you so much! And yeah, I agree, I thought the highlights were kinda overkill too but I was on the fence... will definitely tone them down and add in some of those warm colors. Thank you so much! :D
@ Lodratio: Ohmisgosh, thank you so much for looking at that anatomy for me!!! And the paintover!! They already look better, and I really like the warm added in on the right. Seeing it that way puts a new perspective into it; thank you so so much for taking the time to look at it!!
I think the arm resting on the sword really takes away some of the awkwardness in the composition, it just felt unbalanced, but seeing it with his arm over the sword really works. Ahhh, thank you so very much! I'm gonna take it and shift it up this week--hopefully I can make the deadline long before instead of one hour out like my first one, haha!
Wow, thank you all so much for your thoughts, I really, really appreciate it! :D