05-25-2016, 05:21 AM
Muzz, I think you're off to a good start with that piece. It looks like you're pretty strong with structure and rendering forms. The boy and the tree branches look great, however, the tree trunk looks flat. The mushrooms look like they're on a flat plane, not wrapping around a cylindrical form.
I'm new to learning composition myself, but I can see that you have a lot of parallels. The boy and tree are parallel to each other for example, as are the two branches he's sitting on. Having more diagonal angles in the placement of things would probably make for a more interesting image.
These are just observations from a student, so take them for what they're worth. But hey, great work as usual!
I'm new to learning composition myself, but I can see that you have a lot of parallels. The boy and tree are parallel to each other for example, as are the two branches he's sitting on. Having more diagonal angles in the placement of things would probably make for a more interesting image.
These are just observations from a student, so take them for what they're worth. But hey, great work as usual!