05-27-2016, 08:48 AM
Hi guys,
This is my current WIP:
I need some help to tell the story, but any kind of crits or paintovers would be appreciated! The story comes from Norse mythology. The goddess Freyja is asleep, wearing her necklace called Brisingr Men. The god Loki changes into the form of a fly to sneak into the place where she sleeps and steals the necklace.
I've got loads of rendering to do on the fly and necklace, both of which will require some studying...but I'm wondering if I can make the story clearer somehow. The fly will be hovering above the necklace, where I've sketched it in, and the necklace will be pulled up towards it, as if moved by a kind of gravitational pull, with the loose ends trailing on Freyja's skin. I thought about also adding some sort of magicky effects between the fly and necklace, but it looked horrible.
Any thoughts? Either about telling the story or just generally about making this look good?
This is my current WIP:
I need some help to tell the story, but any kind of crits or paintovers would be appreciated! The story comes from Norse mythology. The goddess Freyja is asleep, wearing her necklace called Brisingr Men. The god Loki changes into the form of a fly to sneak into the place where she sleeps and steals the necklace.
I've got loads of rendering to do on the fly and necklace, both of which will require some studying...but I'm wondering if I can make the story clearer somehow. The fly will be hovering above the necklace, where I've sketched it in, and the necklace will be pulled up towards it, as if moved by a kind of gravitational pull, with the loose ends trailing on Freyja's skin. I thought about also adding some sort of magicky effects between the fly and necklace, but it looked horrible.
Any thoughts? Either about telling the story or just generally about making this look good?
- Sketchbook -