05-27-2016, 03:13 PM
I like the rendering, it's heading in a nice painterly direction. Almost has a Klimt vibe.
I have an issue with her pose, it is pretty odd. If she is really sleeping, why is she posed like a kind of contorted sex doll? There is a lot of overly sexualised content out there...it gets a bit boring after a while to see this used for little reason, unless it is handled in new or a classy way. I know Freja is the goddess of love, sex, fertility etc so the context is there for sure to sexualise stuff, but it doesn't make this particular pose any less odd.
To continue the sex doll analogy, her lower half does actually seem like it is a mannequin's rather than a real person, probably because of the hard lines and the way you have handled the ankle and hip / thigh joint areas. The feet could do with more anatomy love.
I think the elements are all in place to get the narrative out relatively clearly, but for me personally it's just that pose man.
I have an issue with her pose, it is pretty odd. If she is really sleeping, why is she posed like a kind of contorted sex doll? There is a lot of overly sexualised content out there...it gets a bit boring after a while to see this used for little reason, unless it is handled in new or a classy way. I know Freja is the goddess of love, sex, fertility etc so the context is there for sure to sexualise stuff, but it doesn't make this particular pose any less odd.
To continue the sex doll analogy, her lower half does actually seem like it is a mannequin's rather than a real person, probably because of the hard lines and the way you have handled the ankle and hip / thigh joint areas. The feet could do with more anatomy love.
I think the elements are all in place to get the narrative out relatively clearly, but for me personally it's just that pose man.