Harsh Crits Needed & Help Me Tell the Story

[Amit Dutta]

I get what you mean about the arm posing, I didn't really say anything because it is definitely passable, not at all as odd as the legs. Yeah I feel you man. The piece is already quite some way developed in terms of rendering..always a bugger to change that when so much time has been sunk in! I suppose with a predominantly figure focused piece, the pose will really do a lot of the work. I would say look for or shoot some ref...or if you can, get a willing victim to pose for you just to trial out stuff. having a real live person enter poses also gives you realtime feedback on what feels more natural as the poser as well :P

Another reason why you gotta really exhaust comps and get feedback and address all the big problems up front before you get hours into rendering if you can. Good luck whatever you do man! :)