06-12-2016, 11:14 PM
I've already posted the final, but decided to create a WIP thread here, just in case any of you decides to write some feedback :) I won't be able to fix anythig before the deadline, but maybe later! :)
I haven't used perspective grids so the perspective is off in many frames. I'll try to apply more of my perspective knowledge in my future works. I'm also not happy with the hands, and I failed to draw blood on the hands on the frame in right lower corner. Studies would help to fix it. I didn't do any actually, the only study was reading "Understanding comics" (it became one of my favourite books!).
Had a lot of fun with ink, it was my first time using it! I haven't read how to use it, just did it intuitively. Thanks to my decedent grandparents for the ink pen :)
I guess I might make mistakes in English in my comic, would appreciate comments on the text as well (thanks to John for suggesting the word "thud").
I haven't used perspective grids so the perspective is off in many frames. I'll try to apply more of my perspective knowledge in my future works. I'm also not happy with the hands, and I failed to draw blood on the hands on the frame in right lower corner. Studies would help to fix it. I didn't do any actually, the only study was reading "Understanding comics" (it became one of my favourite books!).
Had a lot of fun with ink, it was my first time using it! I haven't read how to use it, just did it intuitively. Thanks to my decedent grandparents for the ink pen :)
I guess I might make mistakes in English in my comic, would appreciate comments on the text as well (thanks to John for suggesting the word "thud").