neopatogen CC4 quickwips
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I definitely agree with Jyonny, the skip from the phone call to '...the end' is a bit sudden. You might be able to add a small panel in above one of the others OR just an extra text bubble with him starting to tell the story in the panel with the phone call. Otherwise, i dig it. Seems pretty accurate to how things would actually happen.
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neopatogen CC4 quickwips - by neopatogen - 06-12-2016, 11:14 PM
RE: neopatogen CC4 quickwips - by JyonnyNovice - 06-13-2016, 05:32 AM
RE: neopatogen CC4 quickwips - by TwilightExplode - 06-14-2016, 12:41 AM
RE: neopatogen CC4 quickwips - by JyonnyNovice - 06-14-2016, 01:49 AM

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