06-19-2016, 04:05 PM
Hey man, keep up the work! One thing I noticed in your pages, is a fair amount of anatomy study, but it is all very loose in terms of perspective and form and your structural work needs a lot of work, especially the faces. Plot out the perspective using a grid and then draw and be crazy focused on getting your forms right in perspective. Go back to basic primitives to construct your figures first.
Loomis's Creative Illustration has a great discussion of figures in perspective
Proko has some good construction videos you might want to watch/rewatch. Ron Lemen has a great series of 4 vids on analytical figure rendering. Mapping out the shadow forms accurately etc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6Pd0xqPzKCc
You are improving a little by volume alone, but I think if you focused much more on slower accurate studies of forms, figures and anatomy in perspective and really focus on nailing the construction stage, your figures and everything else will improve much much quicker. Check out OtherMuzz's sketchbook and recent study habits , he's onto the right idea.
Loomis's Creative Illustration has a great discussion of figures in perspective
Proko has some good construction videos you might want to watch/rewatch. Ron Lemen has a great series of 4 vids on analytical figure rendering. Mapping out the shadow forms accurately etc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6Pd0xqPzKCc
You are improving a little by volume alone, but I think if you focused much more on slower accurate studies of forms, figures and anatomy in perspective and really focus on nailing the construction stage, your figures and everything else will improve much much quicker. Check out OtherMuzz's sketchbook and recent study habits , he's onto the right idea.