06-20-2016, 07:56 PM
Hi Hermi. What I'm about to say is based on merely eyeballing. Please take my critique with a fistful of salt.
Hard to tell if you made progress, there are good stuff on the early days, there are bad stuff on the later ones. And vice versa.
Clearly, there is a humanoid construction. But to get your proportions right by the classical human anatomy standards needs more love. For example, your knees, especially when it's getting closer to the ankles seem to need more mass. Your construction is stylized at best, and I am not sure if that's what you're aiming for.
And I wish the head was rounder (or at least has less edges to get closer to the real thing).
You can draw boxes. You can draw cylinders. I think how you're joining these forms is getting better, but be aware that it still needs work.
Short answer: On top of everything Muzz said, I think you have to be aware of your proportions.
Hard to tell if you made progress, there are good stuff on the early days, there are bad stuff on the later ones. And vice versa.
Clearly, there is a humanoid construction. But to get your proportions right by the classical human anatomy standards needs more love. For example, your knees, especially when it's getting closer to the ankles seem to need more mass. Your construction is stylized at best, and I am not sure if that's what you're aiming for.
And I wish the head was rounder (or at least has less edges to get closer to the real thing).
You can draw boxes. You can draw cylinders. I think how you're joining these forms is getting better, but be aware that it still needs work.
Short answer: On top of everything Muzz said, I think you have to be aware of your proportions.
If you are reading this, I most likely just gave you a crappy crit! What I'm basically trying to say is, don't give up!
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