06-26-2016, 04:18 AM
Wow, such good fortune to have the deadline extended. I'm really happy with a lot of my page but the first three panels I just can't get the text to flow right. This is my lesson for not being totally set on the text earlier on. I thought it was fleshed out enough to start drawing but now I run into problems! This is what I was going to submit, but I have a bit more time to fiddle the text some more - and work on getting the tones in the first panel better. .