06-26-2016, 01:51 PM
I read your final too and told myself 'I don't get it' but my wife was going 'ahhh, that's so sad, and so lovely' - so I guess it needs someone more sensitive than us lot to appreciate it : )
She talked me through it and I see the tragic story now, the last three panels reading right to left was a little confusing. I think a possible problem people have is, if there is no text they jump to the next panel quite quickly (myself included), if there is text they'll read the text then look at the picture longer, and possibly read the text again and look at the picture some more before moving on so they absorb it more completely with text - it's a real challenge for text-less sections (although I guess you were planning to add text!). Hope you get to work on it some more since we got more time ^^
She talked me through it and I see the tragic story now, the last three panels reading right to left was a little confusing. I think a possible problem people have is, if there is no text they jump to the next panel quite quickly (myself included), if there is text they'll read the text then look at the picture longer, and possibly read the text again and look at the picture some more before moving on so they absorb it more completely with text - it's a real challenge for text-less sections (although I guess you were planning to add text!). Hope you get to work on it some more since we got more time ^^